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| Image by Wiertz, Sebastian. "Drafting." Uploaded 3/4/12 via Flickr. Attribution 2.0 Generic license. |
After reviewing my draft using the tips in Chapter 4 of Rules for Writers, I was actually impressed by how smoothly my draft flowed. When I was writing my essay draft, I paid special attention to my use of transitions to help increase the cohesiveness of my paper.
There were a couple of sentences that might either need to be moved or reworded, but I am overall pretty happy with my draft.
Here is the link to my "Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2."
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